Nobody ever left real criticism in their comments on my poetry. So, I decided to get criticism on my own. I went to
~Writers-Adoption and got adopted by
*g33k-ch1k. Her advice is definitely helping me to improve and I think that everyone should try this out. If not
~Writers-Adoption then go to
~WeCritique or
~onewordatatime. I think everyone could benefit from the services being offered for free. These people are using their time and energy to help people like me improve on our writing skills and I think they deserve thanks.
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To twist one purest cause
Into an honest verse,
Itself, a call to angels.
The saddened lips of song that
Kiss away our innocence
From the vile mundane.
~justb
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"I'm not gonna say anything inspirational; I'm just gonna fucking swear a lot." Billie Joe Armstrong
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To twist one purest cause
Into an honest verse,
Itself, a call to angels.
The saddened lips of song that
Kiss away our innocence
From the vile mundane.
~justb
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You're my favourite disease...
--
To twist one purest cause
Into an honest verse,
Itself, a call to angels.
The saddened lips of song that
Kiss away our innocence
From the vile mundane.
~justb
--
To twist one purest cause
Into an honest verse,
Itself, a call to angels.
The saddened lips of song that
Kiss away our innocence
From the vile mundane.
~justb
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You're my favourite disease...
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You're just jealous 'cause the little voices are talking to ME...
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